Chapter 1: Omit Needless Words
* Summary: Eliminate unnecessary words and phrases to improve clarity and conciseness.
* Example: "The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog." can be simplified to "The fox jumped over the dog."
Chapter 2: Place the Subject Next to the Verb
* Summary: Arrange words so that the subject is immediately followed by the verb, making it easier to understand.
* Example: "The dog barked at the cat." (subject-verb-object)
* NOT: "At the cat, the dog barked."
Chapter 3: Put the Action Verb First
* Summary: Start sentences with action verbs, avoiding passive voice and prepositional phrases.
* Example: "John kicked the ball." (active voice)
* NOT: "The ball was kicked by John." (passive voice)
Chapter 4: Use Strong Verbs
* Summary: Choose specific and vivid verbs that convey the meaning clearly.
* Example: "He walked" is a weak verb. Consider using "He strolled," "He ambled," or "He marched."
Chapter 5: Write in the Active Voice
* Summary: Use active voice whenever possible, where the subject performs the action.
* Example: "The students presented their projects." (active voice)
* NOT: "The projects were presented by the students." (passive voice)
Chapter 6: Subordinate Unimportant Matter
* Summary: Use subordinate clauses (e.g., "although," "because") and phrases to show the relationship between ideas and emphasize the important ones.
* Example: "The company's profits increased, although the economy was struggling."
Chapter 7: Eliminate Redundancies
* Summary: Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times using different words.
* Example: "John is a large, big man." (redundant)
* NOT: "John is a large man."
Chapter 8: Use the Correct Word
* Summary: Choose the appropriate words that convey the intended meaning accurately.
* Example: "effect" (noun) and "affect" (verb) are often confused.
* "The effect of the drug was significant."
Chapter 9: Agreement of Subject and Verb
* Summary: Ensure that the verb agrees with the singular or plural subject.
* Example: "The student studies hard." (singular subject, singular verb)
* "The students study hard." (plural subject, plural verb)
Chapter 10: Keep the Relationship of Modifier to Modified Clear
* Summary: Place modifiers (adjectives and adverbs) close to the words they modify to avoid confusion.
* Example: "The very old man walked slowly." (modifier "very old" is close to "man")
* NOT: "The man walked slowly, who was very old."